I never got past the second paragraph of this review. You really need to work on your grammar. There are a couple of passages that I had to re-read about three times because I didn't understand what you were trying to say. A friggin' comma here or there, would have made all the difference.
I can't be bothered to finish reading a review if it's going to be a hassle to get to the end. No offense. I'm sure you're a nice enough fellow, but bad grammar does not inspire your readers to take your work seriously. This is from a journalistic, and not a gamer's, point of view. So please, be more professional.
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I never got past the second paragraph of this review. You really need to work on your grammar. There are a couple of passages that I had to re-read about three times because I didn't understand what you were trying to say. A friggin' comma here or there, would have made all the difference.
I can't be bothered to finish reading a review if it's going to be a hassle to get to the end. No offense. I'm sure you're a nice enough fellow, but bad grammar does not inspire your readers to take your work seriously. This is from a journalistic, and not a gamer's, point of view. So please, be more professional.